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Hero
Dec 8, 2007 17:52:12 GMT 3
Post by Atabeg on Dec 8, 2007 17:52:12 GMT 3
Hey! Atabeg. What kind of super-power(=gift from Tengri) U wish to have? Do U want to be a good guy who is serving for evil master.=Guy from ppl. OR Do U want to be a bad guy who wish to kill your master(to become king).=typical Nobleman ;D I would like to serve my Master...........as long as he does whats right for teh people ;D as for my powers I would like to have the virtue of patients but I f i have to choose a Power................. Since my character is a general........... I would like to have the perfect eyesight & insight. I General who see's allmost everything on the battlefield is a verry good one. I mean eyes than can see in slowmotion and can see through actions and can almost predict what the enemy is about too do. I don't want fire breath or be able to fly nor do I want super Human strenght. Thats more a Hero thing and I am a General BUT!!!!!!!! oh yes there should be a but. It would be more dramatic if he allso had a curse or he had to make a sacrifice because the power oh yeah i would like to know who's army am I leading and & what kind of general Am I? am I 1 of many Generals or Am I 'THE GENERAL'?
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 3:22:08 GMT 3
Post by H. İhsan Erkoç on Dec 9, 2007 3:22:08 GMT 3
My dear Bor Chono Yabghu, nice story you have As for your answer; I would say, I would get into contact with the other souls to counter the crow threat I can help you with Turkic names.
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 12:31:32 GMT 3
Post by Verinen Paroni on Dec 9, 2007 12:31:32 GMT 3
Can you put me in some role for that book? Maybe I can add Ariuns(=pure ppl) -blonde ppl with colorful eyes My Baron can U tell me what your name mean!? Or U can name a name! ;D (U must have some special powers to lead your ppl! ) Hey! Atabeg. What kind of super-power(=gift from Tengri) U wish to have? Do U want to be a good guy who is serving for evil master.=Guy from ppl. OR Do U want to be a bad guy who wish to kill your master(to become king).=typical Nobleman ;D Well, rather not use term ariun, that reminds me of Finnish word orja, which means slave... That orja word comes for meaning aryan. I am lightbrown haired, not blond. Though my eyes are grey. My real name is Juho, so you could make some version of that name. ;D I do not want so much special powers, rather put me to some antagonist role.
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 15:54:09 GMT 3
Post by Bor Chono on Dec 9, 2007 15:54:09 GMT 3
oh yeah i would like to know who's army am I leading and & what kind of general Am I? am I 1 of many Generals or Am I 'THE GENERAL'? Atabeg you will not lead whole strike army! -just small special group of warriors that hunt for magical items. Your ideas about super general was good!(=super speedy!) Don`t worry Atabeg U hunt for magic items because of your curse.(but what?=let me think about it -maybe you are getting old fast?) ;D ;D
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 15:55:29 GMT 3
Post by Bor Chono on Dec 9, 2007 15:55:29 GMT 3
Well, rather not use term ariun, that reminds me of Finnish word orja, which means slave... That orja word comes for meaning aryan. I am lightbrown haired, not blond. Though my eyes are grey. My real name is Juho, so you could make some version of that name. ;D I do not want so much special powers, rather put me to some antagonist role. Ok maybe Ariuns wasn`t a good idea. What about Deer riders?(=deers are not good at steppe so U need to live in woods=dark & evil forest ) Word "Juho" sounds bit hard for Mongols. I guess "Hojuhoi"/"Kojukoi" may sound better meaning "Bit late". "Hojuu"=later "hoi-no"=back then "Hoju+hoi" LOL my daughter can spell it! ;D ;D ;D If U don`t have special power U will be an ordinary person. Fairy tale stories are not about common ppl -am I right?. What U mean as antagonist role?
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 15:56:22 GMT 3
Post by Bor Chono on Dec 9, 2007 15:56:22 GMT 3
ABOUT BACK-GROUND OF THIS STORY : -Story is about conflict between men & Tengries. -Each Tengri will have it`s champion. Like Hurmasta Tengri gives power to Mongols. Kok or Ata Tengri is for Turks...etc(=What Tengri U ppl wish for Turgens?) As for our Baron : Ekh-turso? Tengri(=please refresh my mind! what was in Finnish story?) -The culure & language is almost same! =I mean Pagan age. -What do U ppl think about the Morale of the story should be?.
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 15:58:04 GMT 3
Post by Bor Chono on Dec 9, 2007 15:58:04 GMT 3
My dear Bor Chono Yabghu, nice story you have As for your answer; I would say, I would get into contact with the other souls to counter the crow threat OK I can help you with Turkic names. That would be O...-some! ;D
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 18:06:29 GMT 3
Post by Verinen Paroni on Dec 9, 2007 18:06:29 GMT 3
Well, rather not use term ariun, that reminds me of Finnish word orja, which means slave... That orja word comes for meaning aryan. I am lightbrown haired, not blond. Though my eyes are grey. My real name is Juho, so you could make some version of that name. ;D I do not want so much special powers, rather put me to some antagonist role. Ok maybe Ariuns wasn`t a good idea. What about Deer riders?(=deers are not good at steppe so U need to live in woods=dark & evil forest ) Word "Juho" sounds bit hard for Mongols. I guess "Hojuhoi"/"Kojukoi" may sound better meaning "Bit late". "Hojuu"=later "hoi-no"=back then "Hoju+hoi" LOL my daughter can spell it! ;D ;D ;D If U don`t have special power U will be an ordinary person. Fairy tale stories are not about common ppl -am I right?. What U mean as antagonist role? Well, dark forest and reed riders sounds great. Well, have to think what kind of special powers, I would have. Antagonist means like bad or evil person. ;D
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 18:13:20 GMT 3
Post by Atabeg on Dec 9, 2007 18:13:20 GMT 3
oh yeah i would like to know who's army am I leading and & what kind of general Am I? am I 1 of many Generals or Am I 'THE GENERAL'? Atabeg you will not lead whole strike army! -just small special group of warriors that hunt for magical items. Your ideas about super general was good!(=super speedy!) Don`t worry Atabeg U hunt for magic items because of your curse.(but what?=let me think about it -maybe you are getting old fast?) ;D ;D since that ability gives me great wisdom and wisdom usualy comes with age. Fast Aging would be good or just white hair and beard and in pain at night <- everybody feels sorry for those guys ;D ps can u make tengrikurt my lazy goddfornothing first to charge the enemy brother who allways gets in trouble that would suit him the best
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Hero
Dec 9, 2007 18:16:05 GMT 3
Post by Atabeg on Dec 9, 2007 18:16:05 GMT 3
Ok maybe Ariuns wasn`t a good idea. What about Deer riders?(=deers are not good at steppe so U need to live in woods=dark & evil forest ) Word "Juho" sounds bit hard for Mongols. I guess "Hojuhoi"/"Kojukoi" may sound better meaning "Bit late". "Hojuu"=later "hoi-no"=back then "Hoju+hoi" LOL my daughter can spell it! ;D ;D ;D If U don`t have special power U will be an ordinary person. Fairy tale stories are not about common ppl -am I right?. What U mean as antagonist role? Well, dark forest and reed riders sounds great. Well, have to think what kind of special powers, I would have. Antagonist means like bad or evil person. ;D I have a good idea since your a evil dude. You can have an eye that is cursed.(It curses people and makes them do weird stuff like kill themselfs or kill there comrades) you allso get to wear an eyepatch ;D
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Hero
Dec 10, 2007 2:26:19 GMT 3
Post by Verinen Paroni on Dec 10, 2007 2:26:19 GMT 3
Well, dark forest and reed riders sounds great. Well, have to think what kind of special powers, I would have. Antagonist means like bad or evil person. ;D I have a good idea since your a evil dude. You can have an eye that is cursed.(It curses people and makes them do weird stuff like kill themselfs or kill there comrades) you allso get to wear an eyepatch ;D Hey, That is a great idea, Dear Shad.
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Hero
Dec 10, 2007 16:16:04 GMT 3
Post by Bor Chono on Dec 10, 2007 16:16:04 GMT 3
Very good idea! Atabeg. My dear Bor Chono Yabghu, nice story you have As for your answer; I would say, I would get into contact with the other souls to counter the crow threat I was thinking about it and : -When the old king died Turgens wanted to make last tigin Ihsan a king.(He just needed to marry someone`s daughter. So every Turgen nobleman will start to compete with each other). -But the plague starts -Turgen ppl started to throw food for crows & prey & beg crows to stop the plague. -Only Ihsan knew why it was happening & he will give what crows wanted.(=his eyes!) !!!BTW Crows wish was to rule the sky.(all hawks & eagles & flying monsters...etc must die! -that was impossible mission for Ihsan)!!! -After Ihsan became blind the plague stops(Ppl will think that Ihsan`s evil-eyes were behind the plague.) -Turgen nobles didn`t liked Ihsan & this was their big chance to push him!(cuz he could speak with animals & every dog,bird,horse considered to be his spy. So nobles always keeped distance from him). -So his father`s brothers(=nobles) brake his arms & leave him in wild -alone!.(Tigin will lose everything=the gold items that show his noblity) -Ihsan will beg Tengries for help for 3 days & 2 nights but no Tengri will reply.(He is about to die) -Intead Zeti-ger(=Anti Ten-ger, The Evil) comes & take him to his cave lab.(lab were Zetiger make experiments with blood & flesh =to create Monsters) -Ihsan is given a golden mask to see living things but not sun light(=see in color) and his arms are changed into black color.(=very powerful with iron like skin) -Ihsan will rise as Zetiger`s master-piece! also he still has his gift to talk with animals. -All he want now is VENGENCE!!!(The Zetiger gives order to summon a great army of Monsters to stop Age of Tengries & bring back the Ancient age of Monster Kings & slave all humans) -One thing that he don`t like now is working with crows(=Zetiger`s servents). (Don`t worry Ihsan will be healed someday & will lead his ppl ) What do U think about this 1-st Episode? BTW Altai Sumber`s son is Bor(=he will become known as Bor Chono). ;D
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Hero
Dec 10, 2007 18:53:26 GMT 3
Post by H. İhsan Erkoç on Dec 10, 2007 18:53:26 GMT 3
Hehe you are a very good story writer my dear Yabghu For Turkic names, you can prefer animal names like Toŋa (Leopard; you can write it as Tonga; the ng is pronounced as nasal n), Arslan (Lion), Bars (Tiger), Qutuz (Bull), Buġra (Bughra, Male Camel), Toġan (Toghan, Falcon), Toġrïl (Toghryl, Hawk); or some other names like Uruŋu (Urungu), Sarïġčïr (Saryghchyr), Süčür (Süchür), Beče (Beche), etc... some random names I chose from Uyghur documents Note that my name, Ýhsan, is Arabic You can also ask me anything about the titles and ranks, because my thesis is about state organization ;D Oh and a note: or the Turgens, there should be only one Täŋri (Tengri), one God, and other heavenly beings should be all called Tin (Soul).
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Hero
Dec 10, 2007 20:34:12 GMT 3
Post by Temüjin on Dec 10, 2007 20:34:12 GMT 3
is Bars & Barish the same?
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Hero
Dec 10, 2007 21:01:13 GMT 3
Post by H. İhsan Erkoç on Dec 10, 2007 21:01:13 GMT 3
No, Barýþ (Barïš) means "Peace"
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